"Your second draft." Code Comment; The Critical Eye Part 2

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this is Nice Games

Club, the show where nice game devs talk games and game develop.

I'm Lydia Simchich, and I make nice games.

I'm Steven McGregor, and I make nice games.

And I'm Mark LeCroy, I too make nice games.

For this week's episode, our topics are commenting code, I didn't pick that one, and the critical eye, part two.

And so, if everyone is ready, let's start.