I touched upon a bit of your impressive background in our introduction, but I would love to have you provide some details.

Thank you.

After primary school in a small farming community near Portland, Oregon, I was awarded a full scholarship to Wesleyan University in Middletown, Connecticut.

This was followed by five years at the University of Oregon Medical School.

Consequently, over a period of eight years, I had, had obtained the BA, MS in Biophysics, and MD degrees.

I then completed pediatrics internship and residency at UCLA before entering the military service for my obligatory two years.

Fortunately, I, I spent those two years as a post-doctoral fellow in the National Cancer Institute in Bethesda, Maryland, instead of Vietnam.

I imagine you could tear apart each of the sentences in this abstract, but perhaps you could choose one statement and expand upon the reasons that their conclusions are wrong.